Witness

You may download a PDF of the script here.

I was bored through the first 8-10 pages. I've never seen the movie, and was only vaguely familiar with the story.

But I eventually got hooked. I really liked the John/Rachel relationship and felt a strong conflict between them.

I thought there were several examples of unplayable action in the description. Like when you write thoughts of the characters.

Example: "A moment...when Schaeffer, recognizing Samuel as the Amish kid who saw McElroy kill Zenovich, perhaps thinks of disposing of the witness right then and there."

I wanted them (John and Rachel) to end up together at the end. It must be the romantic comedy fan in me.